Rough Cut Feedback

·      Include more cutaways - I was told that the project was not fluent enough in the cutaways it had and that it needed more of a narrative story behind the people being interviewed.

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·      Cut down footage - The amount of footage that was included was overwhelming for example you get lost in the amount of content that people were saying.

·      Interview more people - I was told to include interviews of a more broad spectrum for example interviewing people from different cultures and upbringings.

·      Include more of the music in between clips - I was told to consider using music in the background to set the scene moreover tell a more foreboding narrative behind an already articulate infrastructure.